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On a distant planet in an alternate universe the enchanted wraith Queen raising enchanted flowers.
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This is a portrait of my new wraith character "Queen Rowan" or the "Enchanted flower Queen". This character is created based on the characters of the series Stargate Atlantis from MGM. But the plot of the series, this character has nothing to do. This is just my fan art created for the story of my fanfic.
On this link you can see the processing image of this portrait exobiology.deviantart.com/art/…
And this link pattern tattoo in the clipart folder exobiology.deviantart.com/art/…

This is a continuation of my previous fanfic.


In the previous story the hiveship of the Queen Gwen was hit by another Queen and Gwen with some of her crew survived by chance. But now they are stuck on an uninhabited planet, which is not so easy to get out.

In this story I want to tell about a Queen which gave Gwen this nightmare.

Queen Rowan is a very controversial person. Best in life she manages to create conspiracies. All that is done secretly, quietly and not visible to prying eyes is a Rowans world. Perhaps the reason is her appearance. Her height is considerably lower than other Wraith Queens, Rowan look very slender and fragile. If there weren't huge waves of red like fire hair probably Queen Rowan nobody would never notice in a crowd. But perhaps the reason is the nature of Rowan, she is from birth much better sees and understands emotions of other Wraith than other Queen. To Rowan very easy to predict the reaction and the actions of others. Even if they are much farther away than apply the wraith telepathic link. About such figures as Rowan say she sees through the other.

By the standards of the Wraith Rowan still very young, its only 1500 years. And most of those years she spent in stasis pod because she was very badly hurt in the battle. This is payback for the belief that the Queen should share with hers people all no matter victory or defeat.

About 800 years ago there was an internecine war of 2 large alliances. The first commander of Rowan took a series of wrong decisions. The result was the complete defeat of the fleet Rowans Alliance. Black Queen Mist took control of all hiveships in the Rowans fleet. With the exception to the main ship, which was Queen Rowan and hers first commander Basford. For them, the black Queen has left a sad fate. Lone stricken hiveship without a hyperdrive with a damaged life support system which was losing air every second drifted among the wreckage one of the largest fleets in the Pegasus galaxy. Losing one battle completely changed the balance of power in the Wraith society. The black Queen, which previously held only the abandoned sector of planets. Where almost no resources now became the owner of the third part of the galaxy. She humiliated one of the oldest families from which Rowan and destroyed one of the largest fleets of the galaxy which was owned by commander Basford.

As commander Basford and Rowan managed to survive is a story for another fanfic.

Now the story about Rowan. She awoke from stasis on a Wraith worshippers planet. In the first time, Rowan could not speak because the ligaments in her neck was cut, it made a crazy third commander of the black Queen. He believes that to deprive the other Wraith voice is worse than killing...it's Hard to say why, probably because crazy thoughts are not like the rest. But compared how the servants of the black Queen treated Basford, Queen Rowan didn't suffer much. Her second serious wound was from the sword but it heals well. While Rowan could not speak and move far from hers crashed hiveship, she painted the surrounding nature of the planet. Then these pictures have become a tattoo that covered her scars.

At that time, Rowan realized that win in the war is not battles with arms, win in the war happens long before battles start. She realized all the mistakes that were committed in this conflict. Rowan realized that before Basford led the fleet into battle, it was necessary to know what is really the balance of power in society. Because it turned out that the black Queen Mist have far more supporters than it looked at first. Now Rowan became the one who goes through life unnoticed but she sees everything that others do not see.

For time spent on the Wraith worshippers planet Rowan learned to grow plants which create the Wraith hiveships. This was necessary because all hiveships of a Rowans fleet  took the black Queen. And the main ship was broken and beyond repair. Rowan was lucky with what on the planet where the crashed her hiveship was a lab of the Wraith scientist. He gave Rowan and the remnants of her crew materials to grow a new hiveship. After this defeat the Rowans kind already won't accept her as Queen and Basfords kind will not give him opportunity to become commander. The Wraith do not forgive such defeat, even to their relatives. Therefore, Rowan and Basford have no choice. Even having the ability to fly away from the Wraith worshippers planet, they still have nowhere to return. They become outcasts among their kinds. Now, to regain at least part of what they lost, there's only one way. It is necessary to destroy the black Queens Empire, kill all the commanders who mistreated done with Rowan and Basford. Because only death of the black Queen and her zombies commanders will be able to wash away shame of defeat.

Now the time has passed, Rowans wounds have healed. The tattoos that covered the scars began to fade because the Wraith have are very rapid cell regeneration. But the main problem stay. No matter how hard Rowan and hers crew will work  but the 300 Wraith can't grow a fleet of hiveships. They are too few even for grow one hiveship. But even if they could somehow miraculously build 30 ships. To manage the fleet and lead the ships into battle each of them needs its own crew. But as Rowan and Basford lost the support of their families and their kind. Except the scientist and his assistants who helped them. Rowan and Basford will not be able to find a crew for their new hiveships.

This means that to survive and regain their position in society they need only capturing fleet of another Wraith Alliance. They need to overthrow Queen of that Alliance. Recently Rowan began to wear the uniform of the Wraith officer and hiding to attend visiting the Council of the first Queen. On one of the Council she find out that Queen Gwen with her first commander Boris gathered a large enough fleet of hiveships for their Alliance. Since then, Rowan began to develop a plan to overthrow Gwen and killing Boris. When the Alliance lose two leaders Rowan can subordinate the fleet to herself. And she even almost succeeded. But that's a story for another fanfic...
 
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kiborgalexic Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Horrifying and beautiful at the same time!OMG 
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exobiology Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much!! That was idea, the Wraith is terrible beautiful creatures!!Avatar 24 by smault23  Avatar 24 by smault23  Avatar 24 by smault23 
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CatsareCuteWMKM Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Great job on her hair!
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exobiology Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much!! I'm glad you like it!!Bananya 2 Shiny Shaymin Flower Heart
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CatsareCuteWMKM Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
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PICB0T Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2016  Student General Artist
Nice drawing and interesting story too!
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exobiology Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much I am very pleased!Flower Heart
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storhammar Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Creepy succubus! 
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Mystika91 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2016  Professional Artisan Crafter
She is very beautiful.  I love your style of the wispy details.  :love:
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exobiology Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much I am very pleased!!
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utan77 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2016
She looks veeeeery cool :clap: 
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exobiology Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much! Just finished writing a fanfic, you read them?
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utan77 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2016
Not yet, but when I find a moment, I read :)
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exobiology Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you, this is my first more or less a long story in English. I'm curious to know what you think
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utan77 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2016
Cool story :D
Even like for such summary, a very detailed.
I sometimes think that the fans have much better ideas on the SGA than the creator of the show :p

Now observations:

- You have not translates this word: раныs 

- Besides: the content (for me) is understandable.
I guess that You make similar mistakes as me: You build a sentence in accordance with the grammar of Your language and not English... but like I said, the content is understandable for me.
Sometimes (I think) You're using unnecessarily OF, THE, etc ... but about this You should ask the English-speaking person.

I use, beyond the google translator, several other translators, because google can translate wrong. Therefore, especially with difficult words or slang, You should check with the other translator.


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utan77 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2016
then I'm not the right person to judge it - English is also not my language ;D
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exobiology Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Everything is great! this is exactly what I wanted to know.
Just reread the text and correct errors. At least those that I know how to fix...There is a very big difference between what I can learn from books and movies and real English language spoken in other countries. Around me no one speaks English so probably will not be able to write on it the right and beautiful text...
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utan77 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2016
I also correcting my English with time (during the translation of the story).
A lot helped me also one person from dA: Wraithworshipper.
Big surprise for me, however, was that in most countries the dialogues are written in quotation marks, while in Poland with a dash.

E.g.

"This is not your fault" she said  => other countirs
- This is not your fault - she said.  => in PL
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